Ben, I appreciate that you have worked much harder on this project than the last one, and that you have made a lot of progress through attending the media interventin sessions. You have done quite well as a result. This work is far better than your last assignment, but still has a few issues that would need resolving: a) you were asked to use a mid / medium shot of a person yon your cover, but you chose to use a long shot? This means that you have not fulfilled the brief, and this could result in a fail if it were your main project. b) You asked another student for feedback as part of audience research, but this should not stand in place of your own evaluation. Still some work to do before you can aim for a grade above your MTG.
Ben, I appreciate that you have worked much harder on this project than the last one, and that you have made a lot of progress through attending the media interventin sessions. You have done quite well as a result. This work is far better than your last assignment, but still has a few issues that would need resolving:
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b) You asked another student for feedback as part of audience research, but this should not stand in place of your own evaluation.
Still some work to do before you can aim for a grade above your MTG.